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@ 2008-02-28 01:28:00
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Entry tags:24 - chapter 24

Chapter 24


you not a noplace
anonymous girl;
mister with his hands on you
he got his hands on
some
damn
body!

- Lucille Clifton

Warnings/Bonuses: Adult themes. Course language. Topless male sim.


57 Gorge Road, Elena Gorge. October 29, 2005. 1:57am


Daniel saw a thin line of light emanating from under the door, it carried with it a torrent of emotion. Even with the urgency of their situation he had to muster enough strength to face the deluge that waited him on the other side of the door. When he felt sufficiently focused he knocked lightly on the door before letting himself in the small room.


He tried to not notice how pungent the fear was and that her skin was slick with worry, “Katia? Good, you are awake.”
“Where have you been?” Her voice cut down his spine.
“There is no time for that, we need to go right now.”
Her wide eyes glassed over, “Its Olivia isn’t it?”
His nod was met with a raspy intake of breath. A quick gesture from his fingers to come with him pulled her from where she was sitting.


Katia picked up her bag and was met with a dark set of eyes travelling down the length of her body. Where they lingered made her feel incredibly exposed. Half laughing he asked, “Exactly what are you wearing? No, that will not do at all. We cannot go anywhere with you dressed like that. Hurry up and put on some clothes you can be seen in public in.” Daniel turned towards the door and waited.


“You expect me to get changed with you standing there?”
“Katia, we do not have time for you to dawdle.” For measure he purred, “I can do it for you if you like.” He chuckled lightly as she threw the bag down on the bed and forced the zipper open.


As she pulled on a fresh t-shirt the brunette quietly stated, “I would have done it, you didn’t have to belittle me by standing there.”
“I doubt there is anything that would encourage you to get clothes on faster than me being in the same room as you.”
Katia swore under her breath in reply.


Frances Lane, Anon. October 30, 2005. 4:13am



High Street, Baker Gully. November 1, 2005. 6:07am



Lyons Road, Ross. November 3, 2005. 4:22am



Angas Street, Woodcroft. November 5, 2005. 5:34am


He heard the soft sound of her footsteps as she slunk in the room. As quietly as she could Katia settled herself down on the floor at the foot of the bed. Her sleeping habits for the past week were intolerable enough, insisting on sleeping just outside his door, but this was more intrusion than he could bear. Daniel manoeuvred himself to the end of the bed. Once he was positioned to his satisfaction he bellowed, “Katia.” The sound punched through the darkness, making her gasp.


She bolted upright and could feel the heat growing in her cheeks, “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to wake you up.”
“What were you thinking? Why did you even come in there?”
Katia let her finger swirl around a loose thread poking out of one of the seams of her pyjamas, “I just don’t want to be alone. If I’m here I know that you haven’t disappeared again like you did the other night.”


There was a guttural tone to his reply, “If you invade my privacy like this again I will assume you are interested in something other than a bit of reassurance.” He felt her shudder from the feel of his fingers running across her shoulder.
She slapped his hand away and scrambled to her feet, “Don’t give me that pathetic sleazy bullshit.”
He nodded towards the exit, “I presume you can find your way to the door then.”


Katia leaned into his line of sight and using her index finger for emphasis sneered, “You are supposed to be looking after me you and left me alone. You just wandered off, and Olivia was out there.”
Daniel rose up in one swift movement forcing her to take several unsteady steps backward, “Do not mistake my intent of assisting you as something other than what it is. I am not here to be your friend or confidant. I am helping you because it is convenient for me to do so.”


She planted her feet and glared back at him, “You promised. You promised my Mother and my sister. Considering that they have both been taken away from me because of this stupid crusade of yours, you owe them.”
“You can be so naïve girl. Some of my actions may seem benevolent, but I am in no way selfless. Testing me with silly games like sneaking in here, will only serve to make you realise that I am not a terribly honourable man.”


Daniel focused on her eyes, sending all his rage straight at her, but Katia held her ground. She stared back at him with an intensity that was unexpected; he was the first to drop his gaze. When she walked towards the door in triumph, he shivered from the blame she had forced through her system. It was a feeling that weighed deeply with him.


“Katia wait.” He pushed his bulk between her and the door, “I was not expecting you. When you came in here, I did not take the time to check myself.”
“Didn’t check yourself? Is that some sort of half assed apology?”


“I can give you a full one. That night when I went out, I spent the whole time on the roof. I was never more than ten metres from you. It is just easier for me to concentrate when I have some distance from you. Everything about you blocks my senses; the roof gave me some space and clear head, but I was always close enough to you know you were out of harm's way.”


He watched the tension release from her shoulders before he continued, “The next time you do not feel like you are safe, just speak my name, I will be there in an instant.” Stepping away from the door he murmured, “Go get some sleep, we need to make time tonight.”


Daniel swallowed back the discomfort that latched on to him as she left. He closed the door and let himself fall back on to the bed. He gazed at the ceiling and softly spoke out loud, “Fuck me. It has only been two weeks old man, and you are already loosing what control you had of her.”


to be continued


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[info]enchanted_black
2008-02-27 03:09 pm UTC (link)
Daniel's slipping. That scene had the perfect tension to it and seeing Katia hold her ground is great. That girl's spunk always gets me.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-02-27 03:25 pm UTC (link)
Damn you are fast...I’ve been waiting for her to have finally have had enough. Should be much more fun now. Or at least after Daniel has a little sulk.

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[info]maonao
2008-02-27 04:44 pm UTC (link)
Words cannot convey how much I adored this. Seriously. Wow. The tension, the words between words, the slight hints... gah! I loved their 'confrontation' and I loved where he stopped her, especially. Daniel's little walls are breaking down and whether that is a good thing or a bad thing, we have yet to see.

But, this is like my equivalent of 'romance novels' (can't stand them)... tension! Sexual tension, angsty tension, hateful tension--it doesn't matter, I love it ALL. I can see why this troubled you, but it came out fantastic, in my humble opinion.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-02-28 01:11 am UTC (link)
Wow, this one took so long to balance I was not expecting this reaction at all, more something in the ho hum hopefully more will happen next time variety. The tension is way too much fun, so you will have plenty more to keep you happy. Daniel lost some ground, but he will find some way to get his leverage back.

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[info]gfitz
2008-02-27 06:06 pm UTC (link)
It is good to see Katia standing up for herself; that was long overdue. And Daniel apologized! Sort of. Every emotion grabbed at me with this one. It was extremely intense and as always I loved Daniel's teasing. I swear if those two don't fall for each other...despite his less than honorable intent, Daniel has some humanity in him.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-02-28 01:20 am UTC (link)
It was overdue, she just needed that last little push. Less that apology as an explanation, but at least it was...something. Hmmm, thats more complicated than it sounds, and may not be the best thing for either of them.

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[info]orestes_tayte
2008-02-27 07:02 pm UTC (link)
Tension, gotta love it!

Hmm, Daniel came into this an unhonourable man he says, it looks if things continue the way they are it seem he'll come out of it otherwise. What scandal that'll be, lol.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-02-28 01:30 am UTC (link)
And I do, so you shall get plenty more.

Despite what he said he does have a sense of honour, but that does not necessarily mean he will act honourably all the time. Oooh, but scandals could be fun too.

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[info]sims2tales
2008-02-27 08:00 pm UTC (link)
As the others have said, the tension in this chapter is brilliant. It's good to see Katia showing that she can match Daniel in certain situations, and in this instance winning. As well as the apology it's also interesting that Daniel is sort of admitting that in a way Katia's getting to him more than he originally intended - didn't think he'd do that for a while!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-02-28 01:36 am UTC (link)
She needed that win just to bring her confidence back up since she will need to be increasingly strong enough to face what will be coming at her later. Shhh, maybe she was too annoyed to notice the undercurrents in what he said.

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[info]bohemianscribe
2008-02-27 10:05 pm UTC (link)
You know i squealed like a kid in a candy store when I saw you had updated.

*Starts setting up fangirl service: "Get your t-shirts folks!"*

Can I just say how incredibly attracted I am to Daniel. I think I have a major crush on him. He's just so sensual, the way you write him and at the same time mysterious with a control over his base instincts that I would imagine would be hard given the nature of who he is, spending such close promximity to a human.

I should learn from you. Narrowing focus to specific main characters makes the story flow so well and your pacing ... need to learn from you too about that.

Fantastic update, great screencaps and I love the relationship between Daniel and Katia. That hostility is still there a little bit from Katia's part but it seems to have dulled a little - enough for her to feel more comfortable with Daniel around than without.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-02-28 01:56 am UTC (link)
You must have figured out it was getting close since I have been so quiet and a bit edgy lately.

If only men were really like that huh? But you are exactly right, he is constantly battling between his instincts and well everything else. When he is alone he can relax and let it go, so her invasion pushed him in ways he had quite planned for, so you get him reacting without thinking things through.

It dose make it easier, because it does set up all other events to be happening around them, but equally it puts pressure on making sure the main narrative is moving on. That’s giving me grief, the passage of time and making sure something does happen (other than just banter in the case of these two).

Thank you. And never fear, there is still hostility, she is just working out what buttons she can push.

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[info]sim_fi
2008-03-01 08:11 pm UTC (link)
Love it! I say ditto to all the other comments. Always looking forward to the next chapter.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-02 04:55 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I do appreciate all the support. And it will be very, very soon…

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[info]eshuff
2008-03-02 12:34 am UTC (link)
Now that is cooking...every single shot is stunning. I am in awe.

And some men are like that. The emotion, the energy and the tension...beautiful. Apart from the fact that I love Daniel!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-02 05:02 am UTC (link)
Ack, I don’t see them like that. There are still some I would have tweaked a bit if I were patient enough. But there are a couple I am pleased with, but that’s are the same shots that just come together so easy I feel like I am cheating.

I suppose there must be a handful of them out there somewhere, but my pixel one is already enough of a handful. I think I will stick to my nerd boy in RL.

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[info]azzy
2008-03-02 12:38 pm UTC (link)
I cant really say im sorry for him, guess he underestimated Katia some. :)

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-02 02:45 pm UTC (link)
Quite a bit actually. But don't tell him that.

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[info]azzy
2008-03-02 03:04 pm UTC (link)
my lips are sealed ;)

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[info]simsbarbie
2008-03-30 06:49 pm UTC (link)
Hot...

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-31 01:25 pm UTC (link)
But he was trying so hard to be scary...

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[info]necroticmind
2008-04-04 01:59 am UTC (link)
Go Katia! It's good to see her stand her ground. The girl's got spunk.

Still, I find Daniel endearing in his own vampy way. Good update, as always. x)

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-04 05:54 am UTC (link)
It was in there somewhere just waiting for a chance to show up.

Ah yes, he just wants an easy ride through all this, but is not winning. Thank you!

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