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Entry tags:26 - chapter 26

Chapter 26


You will not soon forget my hands,
Nor yet the way I held my head,
Nor all the tremulous things I said.
You still will see me, small and white
And smiling, in the secret night,
And feel my arms about you when
The day comes fluttering back again.

- Dorothy Parker

Warnings/Bonuses: Adult themes. Course language. Cheesy pick up line. Partially undressed pixels. Strong sexual references.


4311 Esplanade, Seascape. November 13, 2005. 10:39 pm


The past few days had brought on a dull routine for which only one of them was grateful. The pace Daniel set for them left every activity rehearsed and predictable that they had not bothered to speak a word to each other since the night before. However, the mood in the lift had been anything but cordial. Daniel could feel the exasperation building in her as they moved upward; he could have sworn she sensed that something was different tonight.


In front of the door he dropped a key card into her hand. “What’s this?” she said, her brow furrowed.
Daniel picked up the thin piece of rectangular plastic, spun it around in his fingers while he scrutinised it, “It appears to be the key.”
“Don’t be an ass, I mean why are you giving them to me?”
He pushed it back into her hand, “Because you will have a hard time getting in the room without it.”


Katia glowered at him, “You aren’t coming in then?”
“Not tonight.” He nodded to her and started on his way back to the lift.
“Why do you keep doing this?” Her reply was loud enough to attract the attention of a couple that were just exiting their room. They shot a look at Katia and Daniel, eyeing them both with apprehension.


He stopped and clenched the muscles along his back, and uttered to himself, “Why must you be so obstinate all the bloody time?” He spun around, pulled the card from her hand and slid it into the door mechanism, “Perhaps we should continue this in the room, out of earshot.” When the door popped open with a click he grabbed her arm and forced her inside, “What exactly are you having difficulty with?”


“We drive, we stop and you piss off every single night. You barely even speak to me.” Her hands came to rest abruptly on her hips, “Actually you don’t speak at all, you growl orders at me and that’s it.”
His finger pressed into his forehead as he counted to ten in his head before he replied, “Katia, I am not going to spend all night arguing with you. I have much more appealing things to do. Just go find something to occupy yourself with.”
She tapped her foot on the floor several times and with a huff took a look around the room, “Wow, it’s actually kind of nice.”


“I thought it might make it easier, being somewhere a bit more comfortable since we are going to be here a couple days.”
“Two days? I thought we needed to keep moving.”
“We are far enough ahead now for me to be able to track down an old friend and get caught up on a bit of information. However, it is another vampire, so you have to stay here.” With a mocking smile he added, “I do not think she would play nice if you were to get too close.”


A shiver forced her to rub her arms to ward of the goose bumps, “Who is she?”
“That is personal.”
Her eyes narrowed with suspicion, “So wait, how personal?”
“Enjoy your stay Katia.” As he walked out he had to shake off the heavy feeling that followed as he shut the door.


22 Pottery Road, Seascape. November 13, 2005. 11:27 pm


Her heels clicked sharply on the marble tiles. Josephine loved the sound. She had picked this apartment just because of this floor. It was a ridiculous reason that landed her with a place that was far too large for her on simply an impulse, but when she walked across the room, she felt predatory. It was just the right mood to deal with her guest.


She had heard him let himself in half an hour before, but was determined to keep him waiting at least this long while she hunted through her closet for just the right thing to wear. He waited and she made an entrance. It was an understanding developed over many decades and served as a replacement for any sort of tedious small talk which attempted to explain the gaps between his visits.


As she walked towards him she put extra weight into each step, just enough to make her hips sway just that little bit more. “And what do I owe the pleasure of your visit?”
His eyes languished over her, “I just needed to see you.”
Her arms folded briskly across her chest, “Who is it this time? You and I both know you only ever come here because you want to forget about someone else.”
Delicately he slipped his index finger in behind her hand, coaxing it free and taking it into his own, “There is no one else.”
Her head shook, but the motion was warmed with a playful smile, “You are a terrible liar.”


A small tug of her hand brought her closer, “Needing you is not a lie.” His head dipped in close to hers, his mouth just above her own, hesitating until she showed signs of returning the gesture by pressing her lips to his. Daniel pulled them out of increasingly deeper kisses until she leaned her body into his and softly whimpered if he began to move away.


Daniel moved his hands down the familiar curve of her back, dipping under the hem of her dress and letting his fingers follow the contour of her hips upward as he lifted her dress up over her head and out of his way. His own clothing quickly followed suit, all of which ended up in a crumpled pile on the floor. Unencumbered, he sank into the couch pulling her towards him.


22 Pottery Road, Seascape. November 15, 2005. 11:52 pm


“I really should go.”
Tapping his chest Josephine teased, “Back into the arms of another woman.”
“She is a harpy. I think she would rather dismember me than sleep with me. Or anything else for that matter.”
“So you like her.”
He peeked at her through half closed eyelids, “She is too infuriating to like.”


Her finger trailed gently down, only stopping to swirl across his abdomen, “But she is the reason you are here.”
“Only because I needed someone sane to talk to.”
“I do not believe you for even a single moment. You have always been so easily seduced by humanity.”
“I have had enough of that as you well know. No, when this is done, I have no interest in delving into their concerns any more. I much prefer being seduced by the likes of you.” He stretched his shoulders and he pushed her hand downward.


“Quit trying to avoid the subject.” She said as she playfully pinched his side.
“Stop, I have been brutalised by you enough over the past day.” Sighing he got up from the bed and began to pull on his clothes, “I know my faults well enough to not have you point them out to me. What about you though? You have not mentioned anyone to me for a while.”
“I have been seeing someone. His name is Claudio.” She tilted her head up towards him, “ Does that make you jealous?”
“Of someone name Claudio? Absolutely not.”


“I should banish you from my house for being so rude.”
“How could I be jealous of you finding someone who makes you happy. Now give me a quick kiss goodbye before I go.” Their lips met in a soft understanding of the fondness and intimacy they shared. He held his forehead against hers for a few brief moments before letting his face slide into a wide devilish grin, “Expect to hear a woman shrieking like a banshee in about thirty minutes or so.”

4311 Esplanade, Seascape. November 16, 2005. 12:17 am


As Daniel walked in the room he was greeted by a forced silence. He clicked the door shut and headed towards the shower. The water was running by the time the scent of perfume and passion made Katia’s lip curl upward in anger.



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Good worck..
(Anonymous)
2008-03-15 09:52 am UTC (link)
Wow......nice update....I love your story..

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Re: Good worck..
[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-16 02:14 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much!

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[info]bohemianscribe
2008-03-15 11:57 am UTC (link)
I think someone is jealous ... *whistles* .. Tsk Tsk Katia.

I love seeing that Daniel had this very human need to lose himself for a few hours in the arms of passion. It certainly shows his very human emotion no matter how many times he tries to ignore that fact and say that humanity doesn't interest him.

I am thinking, there's going to be a huge yelling match when Daniel gets out of the shower ... all right, enough thinking of Daniel in the shower!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-16 02:14 am UTC (link)
Someone is at the very least not happy with being there so long by herself.

Being with Josephine is safe, because he can remain fairly detached and feel without having to worrying about those pesky emotion things. But I agree, hiding from it does show under all that he knows he is still more human than he likes to admit

Hey - there is a distinct possibility that he will never get a chance to finish that shower.

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[info]azzy
2008-03-15 12:46 pm UTC (link)
hahhahh that is just the greatest update ever. i bet he's in for quite the pissy fit from Katia. ^_^ Go girl!

im beginning to like her more and more.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-16 02:15 am UTC (link)
Cheers! She is just a little bit displeased isn’t she?

She will be coming out of her shell a bit more as we go along so should be even more fun.

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[info]jessicus
2008-03-15 02:29 pm UTC (link)
I never stop loving the tension that forments between Katia and Daniel. Katia is looking tired, hmhmm.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-16 02:16 am UTC (link)
That’s good news because I can’t ever seem to manage to have them being civil towards each other. Tired and getting a bit over this whole thing.

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[info]enchanted_black
2008-03-15 03:14 pm UTC (link)
Oh, Katia. Poor jealous poppet.
And if ever a character reminded me of black silk and cigarette smoke, it would be Josephine. There's just something about her.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-16 02:16 am UTC (link)
Only jealous that he seems to do whatever he pleases.
I’m pleased she came across like that, I was thinking about the classic heroines of the 40s and 50s when I wrote her.

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[info]sims2tales
2008-03-15 03:15 pm UTC (link)
I agree that Katia's just a tiny bit jealous - or as jealous as hell and ready to knock his head off! I also have the feeling that Daniel will enjoy every second of her screaming at him :D Perhaps Katia will eventually accept that protecting her isn't a picnic for him either, and will cut him some slack when he has to vanish for a while.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-16 02:18 am UTC (link)
She is certainly annoyed that he just left her there on her own. Ah yes they do enjoy a bit of light banter now and again :). She just really does not like having someone else in control, when he leaves without saying anything specific about where he will be it makes her a bit crazy. You would think she would come to appreciate the time to herself as well.

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[info]maonao
2008-03-15 04:01 pm UTC (link)
Josephine is gorgeous. Wow. Where did you get that hair? I'm still in awe of her loveliness!

I find it interesting that Daniel has what we essentially refer to as a 'booty call' friend or a 'friend with benefits'. I didn't think he had it in him, but he is still a man and he had that issue with falling for Lily before. Does that mean he likes Katia? I'm not completely on board with that. I like their tension, but Daniel's emotions always seem so sincere... I don't think they'd be so rushed. I'm thinking it was more a sexual build up than anything else. Poor guy, lugging an infuriating girl around!

Why is Katie scowling, I wonder? Does she know and if she does, how? I guess we'll find out. Great pictures--I loved how you did it without gratuitous nudity!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-16 02:21 am UTC (link)
I was after elegant and timeless more than anything else, but it surprised me how well she turned out. Its an edit of one of Rose’s free hair from Shady Sims 2.

Josephine is very much a convenience but not just sexually, but helps to ground him. When everything is getting to you and you just want to disappear for a while what safer place than in the arms of you lover? It means he is worried about the potential rather than the actual, and just wanted a good dose of his own life to keep himself focused.

Katia is first off annoyed that he just ditched her there on her own but it was the odours she picked up that made her realise that when he said personal, he actually meant it, not just wanting not to tell her.

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[info]gfitz
2008-03-15 04:56 pm UTC (link)
I absolutely love the way Daniel plays with Katia! Clearly there is so much more between them that they both deny. What that is remains to be seen but I do like the fact that despite his denials, Daniel is very much still "human".

Wonderful update. Josephine is lovely. I wonder exactly what information Daniel got? hehe

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-16 02:28 am UTC (link)
There is something, but neither is interested in fanning the spark just now. Ah yes, running from the truth is only going to make it hurt all that much more when it catches up with him.

Thank you. I wanted her to evoke a certain grace and she turned out better than I expected really. He actually did gather a bit of information, but it was mainly just him convincing himself of the things he thinks he does not need.

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[info]eshuff
2008-03-16 10:22 pm UTC (link)
Josephine is indeed beautiful. Lovely sensual work. Gorgeous sets!

Jealousy is an expensive emotion. If that's what Katia is feeling, and I'm not entirely convinced it is, she'll have to be prepared to give up almost everything to afford it.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-18 05:13 am UTC (link)
As always thank you.

Not jealousy as in Daniel being with another woman, but jealous at his ability to just do his own thing.

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(Anonymous)
2008-03-19 03:29 pm UTC (link)
Karen87: I'm jealous and i'm sure katia is damn jealous as well! Daniel has a booty call girlfriend!Anyway i think u did a great job as usual!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-20 12:11 am UTC (link)
She is certainly annoyed that he found the luxury of time for this. Thanks Karen!

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[info]lil_d728
2008-03-19 05:57 pm UTC (link)
I would be mad too. Is she still not able to venture outside of the room? I can't wait for the big argument myself.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-20 12:15 am UTC (link)
So would I, just getting dumped somewhere so he can go have a good time, I would be livid. And the staying in the room, lets just say Katia is not a bit fan of rules when the person making them brakes them as well.

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(Anonymous)
2008-03-25 11:46 am UTC (link)
oh man, yet another talented writer in this circle of sims 2 writers! I love your story and I can't begin to express how inadequate and overwhelmed I feel about starting my own story. At first I was thinking of drama but the possibility of doing smth like yours with "supernatural" elements seems remotely possible! Your sims are amazing and your shots and sets are wonderful! me like!- chloe

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-25 03:44 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much for your comment, but don’t let anyone else scare you off trying something you are really interested in. If you are really serious about working on a sim story, the best advice I can give you is to take your time. Find a story idea you are comfortable with and really look into all the tutorials, hacks and cheats that are used and get familiar with them before you start taking any pictures. Its definitely not rocket science, but it does take time, dedication and patience. Good Luck and that’s for reading.

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(Anonymous)
2008-03-26 03:49 am UTC (link)
Chloe: Oh I'm really thinking about it and I've some idea but I'm still toying with ideas before I start writing proper. I'm looking into all those sorts of things too, playing the game for longer, cheats, skins etc to see what i can really get myself to max out my story.

But thank you so much for your inspiration! Btw, I love Daniel. He just got added to my collage of "why I have unreal expectations of guys", I mean, come on, with sims guys like that, you can't really expect me to get attached to a human right? Haha.

but the story is s0o0o00o0ooooo great too, I wanted to cry when he was seeing Lily. Did Lily love him more than her husband?

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-26 11:13 am UTC (link)
Getting to know all the different animation boxes is a big help since it gives you a good idea what is and is not possible within the game environment.

Real ones are so much better for holding though.

Its not something you can easily compare, they were different men, so she loved them differently. And thanks again.

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(Anonymous)
2008-03-26 02:41 pm UTC (link)
Chloe: Thank you, I will take note of that and THANK YOU for writing this story :). It's really creative and you make Buffy the Vampire slayer look so cheesy. I don't think I've ever seen Vampires this slick and sexy. Really Really good stuff!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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[info]simsbarbie
2008-03-30 07:35 pm UTC (link)
Buffy is definately cheesy. LOL But entertaining to lots.

This chapter was very interesting. I love everything about it.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-31 01:32 pm UTC (link)
I loved Buffy because of the cheese.

It was probably unexpected, but it should help to make clear some of Daniels actions as we go on.

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[info]necroticmind
2008-04-04 02:14 am UTC (link)
Uh oh! looks like someone is a little jealous (or just pissed to be left alone for "that". I love the update and the way that Daniel and Katia interact w/ each other. Well done.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-04 05:59 am UTC (link)
More the latter for sure. They just have this way of alway managing to set each other off, its wonderful to write. Cheers!

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