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Chapter 27


Roads go ever ever on,
Under cloud and under star.
Yet feet that wandering have gone
Turn at last to home afar.

- JRR Tolkien

Warnings/Bonuses: Adult themes. Course language.


Charles Street, Hamilton. October 11, 1898. 8:17 pm


Kieran pursed his lips as he ran his index finger along the underside of his lower lip. His forehead came together in a tight pattern of furrows as he studied his charge. Daniel sighed and looked up from his novel, “You obviously have something quite insightful you would like you share with me.”
“So well you know me already?”
Discarding his book on a nearby table Daniel let the hint of a knowing smile appear, “You wear your soul in the lines on your face.”


The red head gave his companion a curious grin, “I have known many men, but none would make such a fine poet as you.”
“But poets only ponder the questions, I have need for answers. And you have an answer to share with me.”
“Well said my boy. I was simply contemplating what further I could possibly have to teach you, and I am at a loss. I think perhaps your education is complete.”


Daniel sat quietly, tracing patterns with his finger across the rough fabric of of his trousers. Kieran’s revelation did not bring with it any relief or disappointment, only numbness. The ever increasing silence finally forced a reply, “And what is to become of me now? Are you turning me out, or am I to remain as your attendant?”


“You may stay with me as long as you wish. As my travelling companion. I have appreciated the company and loathe to have to go back to being on my own. It makes for such dreary days. However, I do have one final task before I release you. Could you go to Longport and escort a Miss Stanton back here. She is an old friend and is most interested in meeting you.”
Daniel gave him a quick nod, “It would be my pleasure.”


6281 Sandy Lane, Hunters Beach. November 16, 2005. 12:06 am


Sophie rolled her eyes at the door, “How much longer is he going to be here?”
“Until he thinks you have learned everything you need to survive my love.”
She looked at him with a well practiced coy smile, “But I have you here. You can teach me. I know you weren’t strong enough to turn me, but for the rest is doesn’t matter. Plus it’s so much more fun with just you and me. I want to go out and have fun. I want to find out just how much I am capable of, but all he is interested in is telling me about is all the boring ass shit I would learn if he actually let me out of this house.”


Max folded his arms impatiently, “That boring ass shit could make a difference against Olivia.”
“What can she do to me now? She’s too late; I’ve already been turned. The bitch better be running away from me instead of looking for me.”
“It would be so much better if it was just the two of us. Why don't we go talk to him.” He caressed her face, “You always do manage to find a way to get what you want.”


4311 Esplanade, Seascape. November 16, 2005. 12:19 am


Katia paced the length off the room while the shower ran, trying to puzzle together some words. When the water stopped she approached the door, her fist bunched ready to knock. It hovered there, seconds from connecting, “No.” She stared at the door. “I'm really not doing this.”


She quickly retrieved a notepad from her bag and quickly scribbled down a few words. Katia peeled the top sheet free and dropped it on the foot of the bed where he would see it when he came out.




Travelling between Hamilton and Longport. October 11, 1898. 9:49 pm


Daniel watched the road ahead with only mild interest. It wast the sounds and smells that took over his imagination these days. The sweet medicinal odour of the acacias and the pungent scent of the horses did little to hide from him the familiar smells of his childhood home. He pounded the side of the carriage, “Driver, when we arrive in Abbottsville, turn west towards Holdsworth, I wish to go to there at once.”


4311 Esplanade, Seascape. November 16, 2005. 12:23 am


Daniel had heard the click of the door, but the rancid taste of anger told him to let her leave. Her patience was more tenuous than he had been able to read, but it was a lesson he would not forget. He had pushed too far and was going to have to pay the price by following rather than leading. More work, but at a distance he could get a better fix on her state of mind.


The first thing he saw when he entered the room was the note. The lower left edge was creased from her haste to separate it from the notepad, but what made his stomach bunch in knots was the annoyingly cute pinkness of the paper and the smell of sweet grass and peaches that wore her like a glove. He inhaled the scent imbedded in the paper before glancing at the writing.


The words he read stung.

Whatever promise you made to my Mother, consider it fulfilled. I release you.

He balled up the paper and tossed it the general direction of the dustbin.


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[info]enchanted_black
2008-03-26 04:06 pm UTC (link)
*won gold medal in speediness*

Sophie is the kind of vampire I would be. I agree with Max though. That "boring ass shit" is important in the long run. Also I love how you've shown Daniel's tenure with Kieran alongside Sophie's.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-26 04:31 pm UTC (link)
*pokes* you are not allowed to be speechless yet. Save yourself a cup of that for next time.

Sophie certainly thinks herself ready for the big bright world, but both her and Daniel are still getting their feet, they just show it differently. This one plagued me for a bit until I realised this was one of those moments when all three threads converge.

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[info]enchanted_black
2008-03-26 04:37 pm UTC (link)
Daniel does show it differently. He always comes off as a seasoned vampire. Like he knows the ins and outs.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-26 04:47 pm UTC (link)
You have to watch out for those quiet ones though...

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[info]sims2tales
2008-03-26 04:48 pm UTC (link)
Oh dear, I think doing a runner was a very bad idea. Daniel may catch up with her quickly enough, but Olivia (or someone working for her) could be hiding just around the corner. That's also the risk that Sophie would be taking if she gave Kieran and Max the slip. Neither are enjoying the current method of protection!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-26 05:06 pm UTC (link)
They are both desperate for a bit of space, and both think they know exactly what they are doing. But you are absolutely correct, there are real threats out there, some closer than they realise.

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[info]azzy
2008-03-26 11:18 pm UTC (link)
Great update - thank you!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-27 02:58 am UTC (link)
My pleasure, thanks for taking the time to read it!

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[info]maonao
2008-03-27 12:15 am UTC (link)
Ahhh, Daniel finally crossed that line. It's understandable that the button-pushing would eventually lead to something. They've been stuck together awhile now without any real chance for space.

I just hope he finds her before someone else does...

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-27 03:10 am UTC (link)
Button pushing + stubborn is eventually going to lead to someone doing something not so smart, and that time he had with Jo just gave her enough of a push to think that she much preferred being on her own.

Lets see how much she payed attention to his evasion tactics...

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[info]bohemianscribe
2008-03-27 12:49 am UTC (link)
100 Days is always an inspiration to me. You weave this story in such a mesmerizing manner with such a super human degree of patience and attention to detail. Everytime I read, I marvel at your ability to keep the reader entranced, to give enough to whet the appetite and to draw us in so effortlessly.

I am intrigued by Miss Stanton and why she wants to meet Daniel in his past. I think it will lead to more revelations.

Katia ...her reaction speaks volumes. Why would she be so concerned about this if not for any other reason than developing feelings for the man who is her protector. And Daniel, he wanted to test her boundaries because of his own developing feelings.

This will be an interesting adventure. Can Daniel bite his own pride to be a follower rather than a leader? Can Katia admit the true reason behind her anger at Daniel?

A wonderful update my dear and a feast for the eyes as always.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-27 03:24 am UTC (link)
You also get to hear the bitching and moaning that goes on in the process, that patience has an equal about of doubt and fear attached to it.

Miss Stanton...I want to tell you things but must not. The trip to see her does have several purposes though.

Katia is certainly angry, but I would not go so far as to say it was anything more than her reacting to Daniel telling her one thing (that he would always be there to protect her) and doing another (disappearing for a couple days coming back smelling of perfume).

He has not been a follower for quite a while...

Cheers my dear, thank you as always for all the support!

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[info]eshuff
2008-03-27 01:22 am UTC (link)
First, the Miss Kitty notepad...I am laughing so hard -- that is absolutely perfect!

The opening scene -- Daniel's tentative, uneasy dialogue with Kieran is wonderful. And I love the description when he is traveling. I don't know what an acacia smells like, but as a rider, I sure know what a horse smells like. Very evocative.

Sophie is astonishing to me. She certainly has a lot of self confidence, hopefully not misplaced.

Love the shot of Daniel with the shaving cream on his face. For some reason, I never thought he'd have to shave, don't know why, he's definitely an adult male, vampire or not.

And I'll second the thought, and some reservations, about Daniel's ability to settle for following rather than leading. Or directing.

Wonderful, inspirational writing and such gorgeous shots. I've had a few very black days, so this is very well met. Thank you.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-27 03:35 am UTC (link)
As soon as I saw that paper, I knew what I had to do.

I'm glad that came across, he was starting to finally feel wanted and needed, so that chance at suddenly being left was a bit of a shock.

From what she has been told she is all that, so her ego is in danger of needing its own post code.

Other things still work...

It might amuse him for a little while, I think it all depends on how well she does at averting danger.

Thank you, it is my pleasure.

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(Anonymous)
2008-03-27 01:42 am UTC (link)
Chloe: wonderful! This is going to make for some intersting action later, I mean Katia not knowing the degree of danger she is in and running off. I can't wait to see daniel's reaction if he manages to find her... that's if he can before Olivia does or if he is going to pursue her. How'd you get the pink kitty paper with the exact words and writing???

Thank you for writing this story, great to read as always :)

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-27 03:42 am UTC (link)
She knows the danger, but its still something not tangible compared to tolerating being ordered about by someone, who as far as she is concerned, breaks the promises and rules he gave to her. Olivia and her followers are close...

The paper is from here, and I just used photoshop to put the text in.

You are quite welcome, thanks for taking the time to read it.

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(Anonymous)
2008-03-27 03:50 am UTC (link)
Karen:Do you have a feed or maybe a program to let me you have updated? I'm always the last to read(sigh). Anyway, I think Sophie should really learn more and do not be so full of herself. Katia is pissed off! Hopefully she wouldn't runs into troubles!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-27 06:07 am UTC (link)
You are not doing too bad, I just posted this last night. There is a way on LJ to sign up to a feed (http://100daysofsorrow.livejournal.com/data/rss) but what is maybe easier is to log into your LJ account and then go to the 100days profile page and at the top where all the symbols are, click on the "track this" icon (the one shaped like a thumb tack) and you can set it to email you whenever a new entry is posted.

Sophie has been encouraged to some degree to be like that, she has known for a while that she is "special" and she needs that bravado for when she does finally meet Olivia, they just maybe need to help her contain it a bit more. Ah yes, when trouble is not following Katia, she seems to make it for herself.

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[info]jessicus
2008-03-27 12:59 pm UTC (link)
Excellent update. ah, Katia left.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-27 03:22 pm UTC (link)
Cheers! Yep, gathered her wares and off she went.

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[info]balberithsbride
2008-03-28 12:47 am UTC (link)
it amazes me how you can tell us so much but reveal so little, and still keep everyone slightly obsessed with what will happen next.
I don't think Katia had acted very wise, although I know that there is a lot more to come, so I don't really worry. GREAT JOB. I adore this story.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-28 03:48 am UTC (link)
I always worry that I let things get a little too convoluted, but what always seems like a simple scene always becomes so complex in terms of little hints all made to look so innocent. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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[info]gfitz
2008-03-28 02:42 am UTC (link)
I had the pleaseure of reading this yesterday (I think) but felt too icky to be able to leave a proper comment. I don't know if you ever get tired of me saying this but of course I loved it. Writing, screencaps, everything.

I think Katia is making a big mistake in leaving regardless of her anger. Daniel did push too far by leaving her for so long and doing what I am sure Katia thinks is nothing more than finding pleasure in the arms of a woman. I suspect that bothers her as well although she may not realize perhaps.

Sophie...I agree her ego is massive. I suspect it could be well founded but do I think she is ready to take on Olivia by herself? No, I don't. I hope she will see reason. She needs a little more maturity perhaps or some sort of wake up call.

Loved the stationery. I'm getting it LOL!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-28 03:45 am UTC (link)
Thank you and I hope you are feeling better!

Not the best idea she has ever had, but she expects everyone to play by the rules and he bent them. What tiny bit of trust she was building up is now pretty flattened.

Kieran is pretty good at keeping an eye on his charges, I am sure he will crack the whip a bit before Olivia comes along.

Its obnoxiously cute isn't it. She must have read my mind when she decided to make it.

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[info]gfitz
2008-03-28 05:22 am UTC (link)
I confess I would like to see how Kieran interacts with Sophie. She is so headstrong and yet I believe he is strong enough to control her.

Too bad that wasn't around when Beth was doing one particular chapter of Rafe's Journal. That would have been so perfect...

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[info]gfitz
2008-03-28 05:23 am UTC (link)
*sigh* I wish I knew how to edit my comments...I meant the stationery...

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-28 05:48 am UTC (link)
We should be getting to that...sometime. I swear some of these things are already being planned in my head and I think they will end up appearing soon, but it takes ages to actually get to that bit of the story.

I knew what you meant. Only paid account holders get to edit comments.

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[info]redqueenofevil
2008-03-28 07:36 am UTC (link)
I don't know why, but I didn't see Katia's departure coming. It'll be quite interesting to see what develops next though.

This update was a nice homecoming gift, after being away for a few days. Thank you.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-28 11:12 am UTC (link)
She has an independent streak and not only is she pissed off, but she just had time to make herself think that she was just fine without him around. Lots of dastardly things being plotted at the moment...

You are quite welcome!

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[info]the_simblogger
2008-03-29 01:44 am UTC (link)
God this story is amazing. Your snapshots and characterizations are incredible. I wish there were more writers like you.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-29 06:34 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much, I just have fun with the story and taking the shots, so its nice that other people enjoy it too. There are some really great writers out there, you just have to know where to look sometimes. Take a look through the links list - I'm a bit behind on updating it, but most are still ok - and you might find a few more that you like.

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[info]the_simblogger
2008-03-29 06:38 am UTC (link)
Yeah, I've found a few other stories I'm keeping an eye on, but you're just... wow! I feel humbled. My little story's gonna look like crap compared to this, but I'm still practicing my snapshots-taking, and I've gotten a lot better. I'm in the habit now of always looking for walls that are down, or if I have to take the shot in buy/build mode not to have any grids at all, and I try to look out for talking/thought bubbles, friendship points and plumb bobs too. (Of course I might keep some talking and thought bubbles in if they relate, but anyway this rambling is my saying that you've inspired me to do the best job I can. Thank you for that.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-29 07:18 am UTC (link)
Honestly its all in doing a bit or reading up, asking questions and practising. And don't worry so much, this is supposed to be fun, if you aren't having a good time its just going to become like hard work. Making sure the walls are up, that you are in the live mode and even having ceilings in place just becomes habit after a while. Take a look at the Britannica Dreams Movie Making Tutorial, even though it is written for machinima, I found it invaluable when I first started out, especially the useful mods and the cheat codes.

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[info]simsbarbie
2008-03-30 07:56 pm UTC (link)
I can't wait for more..

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-03-31 01:35 pm UTC (link)
I promise it is in the works at the moment!

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[info]sims2_elevator
2008-04-01 12:37 am UTC (link)
Heey, I finally followed the GOS link and I just spent like 2 hours reading the whole tale. I don't usually like vampire lit unless the vamps are out and out monsters, but this is really more character driven and not caught up in any silly "children of the night" type stuff. I really like it!
Is it strange that I love Josephine to death even though she's only appeared for one chapter? I hope she gets a bigger role, actually. But the main characters are terribly interesting, especially Katia's evolution from this shy, haunted, career woman to someone who kind of knows what she's doing with herself.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-01 05:56 am UTC (link)
I suppose I settled on vampires because it gives me the luxury of the different time periods to play around with, and well honestly, because I am a nerd and like that sort of stuff. Josephine will certainly be around more often now, she has a big part to play later on in the story. Thanks so much for taking the time to read this and comment, its much appreciated!

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[info]necroticmind
2008-04-04 02:19 am UTC (link)
OoOoh! She told him, didn't she?! This may just prove my dorkiness, but I luv Daniel with shaving cream on his face. CUTE!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-04 06:01 am UTC (link)
He got off easy too, if she had said it to his face it would not have been quite so kind. I am seriously in the dork camp too, I have been waiting for ages to get to use that shaving cream face mask.

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[info]samiakki
2008-04-06 03:36 pm UTC (link)
Well, now I've been reading everything and have to wait for an update as everyone else...

I must say in all honesty this is absolutely one of the best things I've ever read; simstories, books, poetry you name it, it stands out as a beautiful work of art and the structure of it is great beyond words to express! The sheer quality of both text and pictures, you possess the creativity and talent of a true artist.

Look forward to the next update, I am so hooked by now...

I really hope he gets to her before Olivia does.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-07 03:41 pm UTC (link)
It should only be a few days from now, just a bit more editing, then a set and pics to take, and I generally set aside a couple hours a night for each.

Thats really quite lovely of you to say, but I have a hard time thing of it in such a way. This is my pleasure, I do it because I enjoy it, and I am so pleased other people enjoy it too.

We shall have to see...

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-07 03:42 pm UTC (link)
And because I can't spell - that should be thinking of it in such a way.

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[info]sim_fi
2008-04-08 11:25 pm UTC (link)
Awesome, awesome, awesome. *hands you Nobel Prize for overall greatness*

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-09 05:23 am UTC (link)
Thank you. Thats way too much, I'll take a cookie though!

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