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Entry tags:28 - chapter 28

Chapter 28


go on, go on back down
into the graveyard,
lie down where you think their faces are;
talk back to your old bad dreams.

- Anne Sexton

Warnings/Bonuses: Adult themes. Violence. Blood. Retribution.


Holdsworth. October 11, 1898. 10:25 pm


Albert Brown carried out his duties with efficiency, and despite the late hour intruded on his master to announce an unexpected visitor, “There is a Mr. Ashton wishing to see you sir.”
“No gentleman would come at such a late hour.” Raymond waved him away, “Tell him to come back in the morning.”


Daniel barged into the study and headed straight for where his father was seated. As he passed the butler he issued his own order, “No need Albert, I shall not wait any longer, I have waited far to long as it stands. Leave us please.”
Raymond leered at him, “It is rather presumptuous of you to come into my home and make demands of myself and my staff sir. You will tell me who you are so that I may inform the authorities…”
“Do really not know me? You would think a father would be able to recognize his own son. My mother was Clara Ashton.” Daniel’s words were laced with a low growl.


Raymond’s face turned to stone, “Albert, would you leave us please. And shut the door behind you.” He made his way to the fireplace, grasped the poker and encouraged a few more flames from the fire, “I think you are mistaken sir.”
“If you want to deny me, at least have the courage to do so to my face.”


He kept his back to Daniel as he spoke, “I have only two sons and they are both with their mother and sister in the parlour.”
“Did you dare think you could make your indiscretion disappear with so little effort on your part? I can only suppose you are not pleased to have me here now, but I am your son and I have come to claim restitution.”
Raymond was resolute, “I owe you nothing.”


Daniel’s hand cinched tightly the fabric of Raymond’s collar, “Did you know what she was? Answer me.”
“There were rumours, but I believed that is all they ever were. I never thought it could possibly be true.”
“You never thought? You tracked down my Mother and I so that you could take me to Olivia in place of your legitimate children.”


“Please, I beg you to not raise your voice. I do not want my family to hear.”
“I think they should hear everything." With a yank Daniel led him into the room on the opposite side of the hall.


With a firm hold of Raymond's arm Daniel insisted, “Tell them who I am.”
“That is impossible.”
Daniel gave his father a violent shake, “I am your eldest son and I demand you recognise me publicly.”
Gasps ran a ring around the room, and eyes fell on Charles as he stood, “Father, is this true?”
Under the pain of a tightening grip, Raymond relented, “Yes.”


Daniel pushed his father to the floor and hissed, “Tell them what you did to me.”
Behind tears Raymond Sharp began to expose his secret to his family. The birth of an illegitimate child, a debt that he was unable to repay and an agreement that promised the life of one of his children. All his sins were laid exposed.


Lithely stepping behind Charles, Daniel purred into his ear, “Do you not find it revolting to have been fathered by someone unconscionable enough to willing give over his own flesh and blood to a monster? Some men never change my brother, only now he gives you to me.” Charles had only moments to take in the meaning of what had been said to him before he felt a burning sensation on his neck that only lessened as the room faded from his view.


The shaky voice of Edward shot through the room, “Unhand him now. Please do not make me harm you.”
“As you wish brother.” Daniel dropped the limp body of Charles on the floor and pulled Edward to him, “How sad it is for you that your life is now as worthless as mine was.”


For the second time that evening Daniel fed from his own kin. Edward’s body soon fell to the ground and Daniel loomed over his father, his chest rattling against all the emotions compressing against him. His speech was coated in a slur, “How does it feel to have what is precious to you taken away Mr. Sharp? What it is like to loose the things you love?”


Daniel had been to overcome with revenge he barely registered Kieran’s presence even upon seeing him enter the room. The redhead headed first towards the frightened girl desperately trying to rouse her mother. He gently he persuaded, “Get yourself to bed girl, or the bogeyman might come to get you too.” Jane did not need to be told twice and ran for the hall stairs.


Kieran now turned his attention to Daniel who was dripping in blood, hatred and a greedy pursuit of vengance. He spoke softly to his charge, but his voice carried with it no room for negotiation, “You have extracted your price. Please leave us now.” Daniel stumbled from the room panting and clutching his head. Kieran heard him slump to the floor in the hallway.


With one quick look at the stranger Raymond recoiled, “You are one them, you are one of those creatures like he is.”


A firm grip pulled Raymond to his feet, “You disgust me Mr. Sharp, I have never met a man who is less dissevering of the title. You are the only beast in this room. I would feed off of you, but I fear that you would taint me forever. A long brutal death is what should come to you, but Daniel's well being is much more important to me than to see you get your just desserts, instead I will simply see you removed from this miserable world.” Kieran’s hands moved with speed and accuracy, applying just the right amount of pressure to crush Raymond Sharps neck.


He found Daniel as a shivering mass by the front door, drunk on the terror he had excised from his family. Kneeling beside him, Kieran began the long process of soothing away his fury, “Revisiting the past will never give you peace. It only makes you wish you could reach back through time and change it. Even vampires are not capable of that. It is a mistake nearly all of us make and it haunts us. Forget this place, forget him, he may have made your mother with child, but he is nothing to you. They are dust. I am your family Daniel, your father, your brother and your friend. I am everything you will ever need.”


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[info]enchanted_black
2008-04-10 02:47 am UTC (link)
Kieran just showed why I love him so. Everything he said is right. Revisiting the past is always bad news but vampires are stubborn creatures.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-10 04:31 am UTC (link)
Kieran speaks like someone who has experience in this sort of thing...and Daniel is more stubborn than most.

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[info]gfitz
2008-04-10 03:21 am UTC (link)
Somehow I knew that revenge was on Daniel's mind but it never occurred to me he would extract it the way he did. I wonder how far he would have gone if Kieran had not arrived.

I liked that last bit as well. Sage advise to leave the past where it is. Brilliant update and your screencaps, as always, were very well done.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-10 04:41 am UTC (link)
It all really escalated because of his father. Daniel wanted to see him humiliated, but in dismissing him Raymond only set him off. Kieran was rather handy to the scene though.

As always, thank you!

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[info]jessicus
2008-04-10 05:23 am UTC (link)
excellent update. I liked Kieren's last lines, it really captures alot of their relationship.

I almost forgot - Blood! Violence! Hooray!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-10 06:14 am UTC (link)
Cheers! Kieran always knows the right thing to do and say.

More Blood! Violence! to come. But then I say that and end up rambling for 7 more chapters before it happens. But it will happen.

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[info]bohemianscribe
2008-04-10 01:06 pm UTC (link)
In his shoes, I would have done exactly the same as Daniel. I can understand his thirst for what was done to him, what one man's choice changed his life and made him the creature he now is.

Kieran's appearance saved the day, or at least two of the Sharp family. He is certianly someone Daniel can rely on to curb him when he lets his emotions take control.

Once again, a great insight into Daniel's past, showing us the multi-faceted individual he is in the present day.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-10 04:42 pm UTC (link)
Daniel certainly wanted revenge, and deserved it, but whether or not it manages to relieve any of that pain is to be seen. Kieran is certainly very protective of him.

We finally have the full spectrum, he is capable of the far reaches of both extremes between hate and love, which is why he hovers just in the middle ground where its generally safe.

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[info]simply_pinned
2008-04-10 02:35 pm UTC (link)
Beautiful story and amazing work on the images!
Kieran’s last words are touching.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-10 04:42 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! Kieran is very attached to Daniel and does want him to get past some of the things that have happened to him.

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[info]sims2tales
2008-04-10 02:54 pm UTC (link)
A wonderful chapter, and even if it wasn't necessarily the right way to go about it (at least from a non-vampire's point of view), I'm glad that Daniel made his father acknowledge his existence and that he'd used him to pay off Olivia before getting his revenge. It's very lucky that Kieran was there to stop him from going too far, otherwise he may easily have become a different person completely in the modern world.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-10 04:42 pm UTC (link)
Cheers! Daniel did get out of it what he wanted, though it went much further than he planned. He now has great incite into what so much fear will do to him, and Kieran is ever watchful when it comes to Daniel.

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[info]maonao
2008-04-10 11:15 pm UTC (link)
Absolutely loved Kieran's parting words to Daniel's repugnant father. Yes, this was Daniel's moment, but Kieran is a show stealer. That dirty bugger. ;)

I'm surprised by Daniel's ferocity, but I can understand how much hatred and anger he must feel. I'm not so sure this actually helped any, though. It rarely does. Poor guy...

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-11 06:47 am UTC (link)
You have such a soft spot for Kieran. Daniel got what he wanted, and in a way Kieran did too.

The aftermath of this should help clear up exactly why he was so vicious and why Kieran was so close to hand when he needed him...

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Wow
[info]afterthecalling.wordpress.com
2008-04-11 02:34 am UTC (link)
That was a powerful chapter, and a little unexpected. Even though Daniel is obviously not a force to be reckoned with, it's still a shock to see him so brutal. As always, I'm impressed.

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Re: Wow
[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-11 06:51 am UTC (link)
I have slowly been working toward this one, we get to see that very dark side of him, the far reaches of what he is capable of behind that sometimes calm exterior. Thank you!

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[info]lil_d728
2008-04-11 04:09 am UTC (link)
I am kind of glad Daniel was able to get revenge but Kieran words were just what he needed. Great chapter.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-11 06:55 am UTC (link)
He had been waiting a rather long time for that. I'm not sure which one was luckier to find the other, but Kieran does always seem to have the right thing to say. Cheers!

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[info]eshuff
2008-04-11 04:24 pm UTC (link)
Savage and almost mythological in its intensity. Daniel doesn't go as far as Medea, but then he didn't have the opportunity...Wonderful writing. Showing Daniel curled up shaking at the end of his act of vengeance -- is he drunk on terror or stunned at what he did?

Although Kieran is attempting to console him, bring him back, his statement that he is all Daniel will ever need sounds like a boast, and an ominous one. It does seem that he is also reliving something truly terrible that he can use to understand the horror Daniel is experiencing.

Fabulous shots -- I like the sequence with Daniel grabbing his father by the arm!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-11 05:28 pm UTC (link)
Yay – extra points for Beth! I’m so glad someone caught that. In a way he was drunk on the power that all that fear gave him. He went much further than he planned because of all the very intense emotions going on around him. It was his first experience with that, so it took over what he was doing and would have continued had Kieran not intervened.

Not a boast, a promise or a hope of sorts. Kieran is protective of him because of his own past - you are on the money again there. What he said will make more sense when we have a closer look at how Kieran came to be a bit later.

Thank you! (That’s just the OFB anim box customer buy medium. The OFB box has some fantastic animations).

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[info]simsbarbie
2008-04-13 09:41 am UTC (link)

i wonder if mr. sharp even thought of daniel at all, throughout the years?
beautiful pictures, excellent in capturing the swirling emotions and body language that evening.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-13 03:45 pm UTC (link)
He assumed that Olivia would have killed him, so Daniel was pretty much wiped from his memory. Thank you, this many sims is a bit of a trial really.

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(Anonymous)
2008-04-13 10:11 am UTC (link)
chloe: I am just amazed at the shots, especially with the one where daniel is grabbing his father's arm. The facial expressions are so apt as well (how'd you manage all that?)!

While I am glad that Daniel got his revenge, I just feel sad that no matter what he does (like kieran so sharply observed) it's just not going to change anything. Daniel really has been through a lot and i really feel for him. But at least he has kieran now. This episode really shows the amount of progress of their relationship, from "pet" to "brothers".

your characters are so beautiful! I love their eyes especially, dreamy but fierce at the same time, it adds so much more to their facial expressions.

I am such a big fan of your work!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-13 03:59 pm UTC (link)
For the facial expressions I just use facial overlays from Decorgal's Modeling Poses Overlay Hack V2 and the actions was the customer/buy/medium from Jaydee’s Open For Business Reaction tester and then the sims were just placed using the invisible magisplay tray (just take a look at the tutorials listed here.

Kieran did call him "pet" before, but that was really just to see if that pushed any buttons because that is what Olivia called him. Kieran certainly considers himself as Daniels father more than anything, but knowing the connotations that has, went for something a bit broader.

Their eyes are actually a really old set from helaene that I cant seem to part with. I think they are at the graveyard, but have the same name (sparkling eyes) as a set at MTS2 but are definitly not the same.

Thank you!


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[info]samiakki
2008-04-13 01:30 pm UTC (link)
I am so thrilledI got a chance to really sit down and enjoy this. It's very intense and so full of hurt, anger and fear. It shows that Daniel is new at this and is easily overcome by his human emotions, great contrast to the more controlled Daniel we meet in the "present day".

Personally I would have wanted the father to suffer more before the relief of death. The cruelty of what he did to his son is still by far exceeding the quick death, but then again at least he won't bother anyone... I love the picture where Daniel looks down at his father seated on the floor it just shows how the "power-situation" between them has shifted and that now it is Daniel who has the upperhand.

Kieran as always is immaculate and says the right thing at the right time, you have to love him! He shows both care and authoroty at the same time.

Great work! I am addicted to this story by now and you just keep getting better and better. Thank you so much for entertaining us with your brilliant creativity!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-13 04:13 pm UTC (link)
I am glad that did come across, I wonder if I can be a bit too subtle sometimes in the way I phrase things.

Even though his father died quickly he secret was out and he was forced to face the implications of what he did. Kieran would certainly have taken his time, which is unusual for him, but Daniel needed help and he was more important.

Kieran is just one of those very special characters who had managed to surprise me in his consistent evenness. He never wavers.

Thank you! I do feel more confident as things go on, well as confident as I ever get, this past year has certainly given me the chance to explore and have fun with writing in a way I was never able to before.

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[info]azzy
2008-04-17 10:40 pm UTC (link)
THAT was awesome!§ the best chapter yet if you ask me!

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-18 05:58 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm finally heading towards the more intense stuff again. It may take a few more chapters, but I am getting there.

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[info]karen87.myopenid.com
2008-04-18 06:05 pm UTC (link)
Wow, i'm speechless. I knew daniel was angry but to this extent? But serve his good for nothing father right, giving up his flesh and blood to a monster.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-04-19 12:45 am UTC (link)
Some of what he did he was in control of, and some was just something else taking over, but either way even though its something he will have to live with doing, the situation with his father has at least come to a close.

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