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@ 2008-05-10 00:35:00
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Entry tags:30 - chapter 30

Chapter 30


she had been gone so long.
there was so much to unlearn.
she opened her eyes.
he was the first thing she saw
and she blamed him.

- Lucille Clifton

Warnings/Bonuses: Adult themes.


349 Elizabeth Street, Esk. November 20, 2005. 9:39 pm


He had not seen that coming at all. He knew she was angry, but punching him? Daniel rubbed his chin and glanced up to where Katia stood seething. She had not walked out, which surprised him, but he suspected that she was merely waiting for him to give some sort of backhanded retort so she could feel justified in slamming the door in his face. Either that or she was just enjoying seeing him splayed on the ground in front of her. He pushed himself and what was let of his dignity up off the floor.


Daniel watched with mild amusement at the way she tried to hold her ground and ignore the pain as he approached her. Her stubborn nature was returning with such ferocity. He nodded at the limb she was shaking, “How is your hand?”
Katia pulled her arm behind her trying to hide the wince the movement caused. “It’s fine.”
“Let me see.”
“No.”
“Give me your hand.”


“I said no.” She stared back at him, but the expression on his face was more concerned than insistent and it made her feel like an obstinate child. Sighing she held her arm out towards him. Katia grimaced as he moved her fingers and pressed gently along her knuckles, but it was the chill from his touch that caused the most discomfort. “Your hands are cold.”
“They are the same temperature as always.” He let her hand go and folded his arms against his chest, “You are lucky, nothing is broken, but it is going to bruise. Go run it under the cold tap. That should help some.”


Katia let out a sigh when the cold water ran over her hand.
He leaned against the doorframe and asked, “Do you want some ice?”
Katia shook her head. When the throbbing had subsided to a more bearable level, she turned off the tap and turned around to confront him. She knew the answer, but asked him anyway, “That money…you didn’t pick that amount arbitrarily did you?”


“No.” He waited to feel the anger dance past him but it was just the same steady hum of spite and frustration she always had. It was so familiar now it acted like a beacon, but the peaks and fluctuations were muted.
Using her good hand she pushed past him, trying to impart as much brute force as she could. “So is there anything about my life that you didn’t manipulate?”


“I was watching Sophie, you just happen to come with the package. I did whatever necessary to make certain she was safe and well provided for, and that meant interfering from time to time. Are you certain about the ice?”
“What was the point of me even being around then?”
“At least let me wrap your hand for you.”
Katia cradled her arm to keep herself from gesticulating wildly, “By giving us the money, you made me feel useless.”


“You are not going to be able to drive with your hand like that.”
“I thought I was a failure because I couldn’t take care of my own sister.”
“Katia, it will take longer to heal unless you do something.”
Her eyes flared, “Don’t patronise me.”
He didn’t bother to hide his growing annoyance, “I only did it because your sister asked for my help. She did not want you to have to worry.”


The revelation made her dizzy. Sophie had gone to him to save them. Her sister had entrusted their lives to Daniel more than her. “I’m going back to my room. I’m going to go to sleep and in the morning I’m going to leave. And you can just piss off somewhere.”
“Katia, can we please put a stop this, no more games. We start over from here.”
“I’m not playing a game. I don’t want you following me. End of story.”
Daniel looked her in the eye and promised, “If that is truly what you want, I will not follow you any longer.”


Katia yelped as she tried to open the door with her injured hand. She struggled turning the knob with her other hand until she finally had the door open, but managed it with much less finesse than she would have liked. The moment gone, she didn’t bother to slam the door as she walked out.

349 Elizabeth Street, Esk. November 21, 2005. 1:00 am


When the alarm went off, the room was still dark. Katia glanced at the clock. One a.m. She was sure she had set it for seven. Sitting up she reached for the lamp and clicked it on. A small squeal passed her lips at the angry eyes staring into hers from only inches away. She panted out a question, “How did you get in here?”


Daniel flashed his fangs and whispered, “Had it been anyone but me, you would be dead. A corpse. You would have been suckled completely dry before you even woke enough to fight back. As much as you despise it, you need me. You no longer want me following you, so we go with the other option. You are coming with me. Quietly. This is not negotiable.” He tossed her bag at her. “Here endeth the lesson. Time to go.”
“You lied.”
“I have never lied to you. I just tell you the truth you want to hear."


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[info]enchanted_black
2008-05-09 03:41 pm UTC (link)
“I have never lied to you. I just tell you the truth you want to hear."

I liked that line the most. Katia will hopefully push aside her stubbornness and go with Daniel. She may not like it but her chances of survival are higher if she's with him. Excellent update, love, as usual. :D

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-05-09 04:28 pm UTC (link)
Its the sort of truth I think we all sometimes wish for ourselves. Its easier. I don't think not going with him is an option she has any more. Cheers and as always thank you for all the support!

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[info]maonao
2008-05-09 03:47 pm UTC (link)
Hahaha, oh Daniel, your way with words will never cease to crack me up. He has a point, but I just love the way he makes it known. Actions DO speak louder than words. I think Katia might get the picture now.

I hope so, for her sake. It's interesting that Sophie went to Daniel... hmm.

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-05-09 04:43 pm UTC (link)
He always hogs the best lines. She does take a lot of convincing sometimes, but then is working in the dark. Katia is going with him whether she likes it or not.

Sophie went to Daniel because in revealing to her what she was going to become, he automatically became the more favoured adult figure. Daniel needs Sophie and Sophie knows that means she can use that to her advantage.

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[info]pulsebeat
2008-05-09 05:12 pm UTC (link)
“I have never lied to you. I just tell you the truth you want to hear." <-- this line hit hard.

I'm curious about Sophie. How much did she know about the situation? Didn't she know how asking Daniel for help would make her sister feel?

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[info]goodbye_sun
2008-05-10 01:23 am UTC (link)
He has a way with words does that Daniel.

For Sophie it was the easy answer though, the money would make things better for both of them. She knew it would not make Katia happy, but not the extent of how it might eat away at her.

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[info]gfitz
2008-05-09 06:58 pm UTC (link)
I loved every moment of this especially the momentary independance that Katia had. But Daniel is absolutely right about her situation. I was surprised at how he taught her the lesson though...pleasantly surprised. I didn't expect it but I am sure it hit home with her despite her wishes to the contrary.

Great update!

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-10 01:23 am UTC

[info]redqueenofevil
2008-05-09 09:43 pm UTC (link)
It hadn't occurred to me that Sophie would have had a hand in all of this- the money, Katia's safety, etc.

This must certainly be a wake up call for Katia, who has been acting as protector in her own mind.

Great update!

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-10 01:24 am UTC

[info]sim_fi
2008-05-10 02:51 am UTC (link)
Not sure if you watch "Lost," but when Ben and Locke from the show get together, their scenes just make my day. That's the same way I feel when I see Daniel & Katia interact. Their scenes are really some of the best to read.

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-10 05:18 pm UTC

[info]samiakki
2008-05-10 10:17 am UTC (link)
Great job! I especially loved the part where Katia talks about the money and he replies asking about her hand. I can fully understand that she felt patronized when he's clearly ignoring her, then again I was thinking that her outburst might be ever so slightly uncomfortable for him. Maybe he was just trying to avoid the emotional talk rather than trying to insult her, he just doesn't stike me as the "Hey, let's sit down and talk about our feelings, I'll get the Kleenex"- kind of guy... He's come too far into his vampireism to even bother with them.

I truly find their conversations to be very entertaining, they seem to come from two different worlds and it clearly shows the culture-clash in their interactions. It's as if ice and fire were having a teaparty.

Thank you for another great chapter!

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-10 05:18 pm UTC

avablack
2008-05-10 10:24 am UTC (link)
I didn't think it was going to be that easy. Didn't really think Daniel would just quietly walk away because Katia asked him too. I wonder if it's Katia's pride that's making her a little difficult regarding the help.

Great update as always!

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-10 05:19 pm UTC

[info]jessicus
2008-05-10 10:45 am UTC (link)
I feel for Katia. I wonder what she'll say to Sophie when they next talk. Spooky Daniel is spooky, breaking into rooms to prove points and such.

Excellent chapter, m'dear.

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-10 05:20 pm UTC
love it
(Anonymous)
2008-05-10 06:33 pm UTC (link)
So I just started reading your story, and I absolutely love it!

I was also wondering, where on earth did you find Daniel's (the one in this chapter) hair? I would really like it for my game.

Peace =)

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Re: love it - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-11 02:39 am UTC
Re: love it - (Anonymous), 2008-05-11 03:16 am UTC

[info]afterthecalling.wordpress.com
2008-05-10 07:04 pm UTC (link)
The story is forever deepening! Sophie went to Daniel? He's even more involved in Katia's life than she realizes.

I love how Daniel can switch so easily from sensitive-caring to sneaky-terrifying.

Veron

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-11 02:49 am UTC

[info]azzy
2008-05-11 01:34 am UTC (link)
“I have never lied to you. I just tell you the truth you want to hear."

Spoken like a true man. *sigh*

lol

GREAT update, i have been waiting for that for that!

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-11 03:00 am UTC
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[info]mjo5oh
2008-05-11 01:53 am UTC (link)
Wow, 30 chapters. I just found this, I guess I have some catching up to do! I friended this journal so I can remember to come back.

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-11 03:03 am UTC

[info]lingeringviolet
2008-05-11 08:23 am UTC (link)
He tossed her bag at her. “Here endeth the lesson. Time to go.”

I lol'd. And of course that last line was a zinger. I'm always left somewhere in between wanting to swoon and wanting to smack them. hehehe You have have such a talent with dialogue (and that whole knowing your characters inside and out thing I mentioned before.) Always a joy to read.

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-11 03:21 pm UTC

[info]lil_d728
2008-05-12 06:10 pm UTC (link)
Great chapter. It didn't surprise me that Sophie went to Daniel for help. The relationship between Daniel and Katia is so funny to me. Nice way to bring her back to reality.

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-13 06:51 am UTC

[info]uys
2008-05-13 02:31 am UTC (link)
I've been reading this from the beginning and you know I'm not sure I've ever commented :/ I never know what to say that hasn't already been said so...

yay, you're awesome! ♥

Lol there, now I feel better even if it was really lame =P

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-13 07:01 am UTC
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[info]eshuff
2008-05-15 01:02 pm UTC (link)
It's taken me a little while to get here this time -- too much RL in the way!

I adore Daniel, smart, decisive, and full of common sense. This one was absolutely great!

Katia's a bit naive, but she made her point, although somewhat painfully. And her sister's decision to go to Daniel is not surprising at all. He's much more able to take care of Katia than Katia is able to take care of Sophie.

Love the shots, the lighting, and the angles in the bathroom!

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-16 03:41 am UTC

(Anonymous)
2008-05-15 08:36 pm UTC (link)
wow, i just found this story (and i've read it whole)
Daniel is such a perfect character! and i love the tension between him and Kasia.
great!!!

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-16 03:43 am UTC

[info]sims2tales
2008-05-19 09:43 pm UTC (link)
I'm late with this chapter as well, but it was worth the wait :) Again I'm feeling sorry for Daniel - give the poor guy a break Katia! It does seem as if he can't win with her, whether he's being his usual dry/slightly sarcastic self or if he's showing genuine concern and trying to be nice. Being scary is definitely his best option I think :D It's easy to understand why Katia's having a hard time with how much he's been involved in her and Sophie's lives though, and why she's probably more upset that Sophie asked for Daniel's help. In away it's as if Sophie and Katia had swapped roles, with little sister taking the responsibility. She may not like it, but it's kept them alive.

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-20 06:57 am UTC

[info]ohhlalakristan
2008-05-23 07:01 am UTC (link)
wow. i found this story a couple of hours ago and im in just complete awe. i read straight through and i can't get over how amazing it is! you have everything so well planned out, the way everything is woven together. the finer details of the story adding to its layers, its just so perfect!this must have taken a long time to put together.

i really love the dynamic relationship between katia and daniel. its all very intense and dramatic, everything i love. even more though i love daniel's one liners- theyre the best!

i will most definately be watching out for an update because i am anxious to learn whats happening next.

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[info]runzu
2008-05-23 11:52 pm UTC (link)
I d/l'd your entire story one by one every time I got online and have finally caught up. I love this story and it's pictures and just... everything!

You make me want to start my own little story. LOL

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(no subject) - [info]goodbye_sun, 2008-05-24 03:02 am UTC

[info]necroticmind
2008-07-01 05:26 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful as always. *hangs head in shame* I'm just now getting to this... so far behind... I'm off to read the rest!

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